Entry #1
September 8, 2022
8/31: This fruit has a tooth. In fact, it seems as though it has multiple teeth. LIke if it were twenty times larger it could throw me and I would go yeet. As you could tell, this thing has no feet, though I believe this fruit belongs in the sand, though it would be a one man band. It looks like a sarlac pit. All the tentacles fluttering about. though things got weird when upside down, as it just makes you think of sauron from lord of the rings, and that someone has dislodged his eye , don’t ask why, I don’t know how, I have a hard time believing that it could happen somehow.
I liked your use of creative imagery and rhyming throughout the entry. It kept me engaged and interested in what you were saying. I thought the references to Star Wars and LOTR were cool, too.
First of all, I would like to point out how much description you managed to say about a vegetable as generic as a tomato. I can tell that you let your imagination lead you throughout your writing. However, I do wonder what makes you think that the tomato has teeth. Is it the leaves on the stem? The comparisons are so complicated that they keep me actively focused on what you’re saying.