By: Esther Yu
A black hole, endlessly sucking you in
Like a deep, dark pit
Waiting for you to stumble and fall
To catch you with its heavy grasp
Dark ribbons strangle you with their icy grip
Unable to reach for air
A breath, out of sight
And shivering in the frigid frost
Fingers and toes numb
A tremulous body to time
Desperately crying for anyone, anything
As you are entangled
In the depths of anxiousness
Excellent figurative language! “Dark ribbons…” is a beautiful line.
This is so deep and interesting. I really enjoy the feeling of anxiety it gave me and it was amazing!