Spring

By: Abinoam Mallede

The river flowed like a scarf in the wind

The leaves a stunning orange like the sun

The birds song flows through the wind

The water falling from the leaves going drip drip

Flowers all around

A beautiful rainbow on the ground

The butterfly dances through the air

The breeze cools the air all around

Slowly the flowers blooming indicating that spring has come

 

12 thoughts on “Spring

  1. I really liked your figurative language but I think you should add some sound devices to increase the flow

  2. Your use of figurative language helps paint a clear picture in the reader’s mind on what is happening in the poem.

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