By: Abinoam Mallede
The river flowed like a scarf in the wind
The leaves a stunning orange like the sun
The birds song flows through the wind
The water falling from the leaves going drip drip
Flowers all around
A beautiful rainbow on the ground
The butterfly dances through the air
The breeze cools the air all around
Slowly the flowers blooming indicating that spring has come
Good figurative language use with a wide range of it too. Overall good.
I like that you used similes to go into detail about the different things within that scene in the spring.
I really liked your figurative language but I think you should add some sound devices to increase the flow
Your use of figurative language helps paint a clear picture in the reader’s mind on what is happening in the poem.
Sensory details and figurative language really gives this poem life.
The use of sensory details and figurative language really bring this poem to life.
I like how the poem could be read smoothly
I love how the sensory details paint a picture in my mind about what spring is like.
I like the in-depth analysis of the environment and the great details about surrounding nature.
i really like your poem because you have a lot of figurative language and sensory details
I really enjoy the figurative language.
I really liked your figurative language and your imagery.