This is my 100 word challenge blog post that was done on 02/24 and had the following prompt: But where did it go?” She shouted.
Chilling silence filled the air around her as she slowly moved among the trees in the forest. The moon was obscured by leaves above and cracks in the branches shed light onto the creature that she had been hiding from. It got up on two legs and the creature towered above her and it let out an ear-piercing wail. Her blood frozen and a chill spread throughout her body. She let out a shrill scream and closed her eyes, bracing for the impact. Nothing came and she glanced around But where did it go? She shouted to nobody in particular.
Hi Patrick!
This was such a cool story, and I thought it was such a good idea that you left the readers on a cliffhanger. You used some amazing adjectives throughout this whole story. I was captivated by the first sentence! Great job!
Kaylee Georgis, your student teacher from Longwood University