This is my 100 word challenge for 04/23 The prompt was this phrase; “as it let out a pitiful howl” here is what I did with that prompt!
I silently crept through the room, passing the dusty shelving, listening to every sound. The moonlight cast a glow onto the dirty floor, making the whole place seem more erie. I saw the creature pass by in the corner and crouched behind it, ready to strike. I jumped out, with my blade drawn. The knife landed with a sickening thunk as the creature let out a pitiful howl. I stared into its eyes as the light behind flicked down. It closed its eyes and seemed to have accepted its fate. It seems our rivalry had come to its final conclusion.
Thank you for reading, till tomorrow!
-chess2impress
Hi Patrick!
I can’t believe this is only 100 words! The descriptions were amazing, I could visuale the room, and I was shocked at the ending. Great job!
– Angelina
http://blogs.lcps.org/angelinasacoustics/
Hi Patrick –
I agree with Angelina; you are incredibly descriptive with your words, and you put the reader right in the midst of the action. Sometimes, we’d prefer not to be there because it’s dangerous or scary, but you take us there and plant us front and center. Well done!
Mrs. Rombach