Amelia was so interested in Jacob, the new student from Britain, that she could not stop asking questions.
“Are you really from Britain? Did you live in London? What kinds of food do you eat? Do you like Marmite? I’ve heard it’s really gross. I can’t imagine anyone-”
“No,” he replied, “I like Marmite.”
Now this was really interesting. She’s never met someone who likes Marmite.
Jacob smiled and said, “You just need to know how much to eat. I have some for lunch; I’ll let you try some!”
Amelia smiled back,“Really? Thank you!”
She couldn’t wait for lunch.
Hi Ango,
I’m so glad to read your piece. It’s a very logical and interesting story. Your story describes a lovely littler girl. The grammer and clauses are well used. Well done and please keep writing!
Xuerong Huang (Team 100wc)