100 Word Challenge Week One

The‌ ‌ticking‌ ‌of‌ ‌a‌ ‌clock‌ ‌grows‌ ‌relentlessly‌ ‌louder.‌ ‌Tick,‌ ‌tock,‌ ‌tick,‌ ‌tock.‌ ‌It’s‌ ‌like‌ ‌a‌ ‌nail‌ ‌is‌ ‌being‌ 
driven‌ ‌into‌ ‌my‌ ‌head,‌ ‌distracting‌ ‌and‌ ‌intrusive.‌ ‌I‌ ‌stare‌ ‌up‌ ‌at‌ ‌the‌ ‌ceiling,‌ ‌eyes‌ ‌unfocused.‌ 
Everything‌ ‌looks‌ ‌blurry.‌ ‌A‌ ‌car‌ ‌passes‌ ‌outside‌ ‌the‌ ‌window.‌ ‌Suddenly,‌ ‌tires‌ ‌squeal‌ ‌against‌ ‌the‌ 
pavement.‌ ‌Everything‌ ‌is‌ ‌eerily‌ ‌quiet.‌ ‌The‌ ‌clock‌ ‌has‌ ‌fallen‌ ‌silent.‌ ‌I‌ ‌stand‌ ‌up,‌ ‌looking‌ ‌out‌ ‌the‌ 
window‌ ‌and‌ ‌gasping.‌ ‌‌Everything‌ ‌stopped,‌ ‌and‌‌ ‌it’s‌ ‌almost‌ ‌too‌ ‌quiet.‌ ‌Snowflakes‌ ‌suspended‌ 
in‌ ‌the‌ ‌air,‌ ‌the‌ ‌nearby‌ ‌river‌ ‌stilled,‌ ‌cars‌ ‌just‌ ‌seconds‌ ‌from‌ ‌crashing‌ ‌into‌ ‌each‌ ‌other.‌ ‌The‌ ‌entire‌ 
world‌ ‌is‌ ‌paused.‌ ‌Everything‌ ‌except‌ ‌for‌ ‌me.‌
That was my first post for the 100 Word Challenge. Thanks for reading!
-Grace

3 Responses

  1. Angelina says:

    Hi! I can’t believe this is only 100 words! It is so descriptive and I love all of the figurative language. I also wrote a short story for the challenge.
    I was on the edge of my seat the entire time. Great job!

    – Angelina
    http://blogs.lcps.org/angelinasacoustics/

  2. 878159 says:

    After reading through this I really want to rethink mypost, haha. I took a literal view while the posts I’ve read so far, are all scenarios that I want to learn more about!. I would love to read a story about just this story!

    -Patrick http://blogs.lcps.org/chesstoimpress/

  3. Kaylee Georgis says:

    Hi Grace!
    I really enjoyed reading your 100 Word Challenge! I especially loved your word choice throughout. The words “distracting” and “intrusive” helped create a vivid picture in my mind.

    -Kaylee, from Longwood University

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