Hi everyone! Today I have another 100 word challenge for you guys! I am going to be using the phrases “What goes on at Number 29?” and “Where is the gate & the rest of the fence?” in my 100 WC challenge today! I hope you enjoy!
Today was the day we’re moving into our house in Torrance, CA. As we were driving into the new neighborhood we were looking around for our house the number was 28. When we drove into our section I said “Where is the gate & the rest of the fence?” All that was there was a broken piece of fence on the house next to us. “What goes on at Number 29?” The house looked old and rusted, and nobody lived there. We decided to discover. We slowly started walking up to the house when a black cat crossed our path…
I hope you guys enjoyed my 100 WC for April 30! Don’t forget to comment your blog URL so I can check it out! Have a good day!
Hello, well number 29 was a bit of a mystery wasn’t it. I really liked how you asked the question, “What goes on…” as it set up more of a mystery. The description of number 29 worked well too. The black cat created more forbidding. Well done.
Hi Fatima! This piece definitely has some mystery to it. I like how the narrator’s address also has parts of the fence missing, because that gives them impetus to investigate further. The end of the story leaves me wondering what the black cat will do, or if its presence is foreshadowing something else.
Great work and keep writing!