100 Word Challenge #6

 

 

 

 

 

Hey everyone.  Today I am back with another 100 word challenge.  This has been my biggest writer’s block yet.  I rewrote this story four times and wasn’t satisfied until this one.  Hopefully you enjoy it because I wanted to put out the best content for you.  

 My sister is the worst. She gets everything I want.  This week was my first day of high school, and I ran into her friend group.  My sister wasn’t around because she was taking the SAT but that was fine with me.  I tried to pass them, but they stopped me.  “Look, it’s Harper’s stupid sister.  Could you get any uglier?” They hissed.  I didn’t know how to respond. “I thought you had a life but where did it go?” she shouted.  My sister stands across the hallway defending me. Maybe my sister isn’t so bad afterall.

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2 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge #6

  1. Hi Keeley-
    I love your new photo…and this 100WC story. This reminds me a little of the Coke commercial where the big brother harrasses the little brother nonstop. You start to think that the older brother is the biggest jerk in the world, until a group of kids try to mess with his brother. Then, he comes to his little brother’s rescue. Isn’t it true that we can tease our siblings, but if anyone else even thinks about bullying them, we’re there in a millisecond to defend them. I’m enjoying all of your unique stories. I can tell you’re working overtime to deliver high-quality writing in a compact format. Way to go.

    Keep on writing!
    Mrs. Rombach

  2. Hi Keeley,
    What a cool and dramatic story! I agree with what Mrs. Rombach already commented. I have to admit that my siblings and I will bicker and argue a lot, but I would defend them in an instant if someone was picking on them! My favorite part is how different the first and last sentences are even though they are both talking about the sister.

    Kaylee Georgis, your student teacher from Longwood University

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