I was riding my muddy yellow bicycle through the twisted paths alongside the road. I was getting close to the gates. I knew I had to get through. When I got to the station where the security guard was, I asked if I could get through, but he said no. He didn’t understand, but I was desperate. I tried to convince him, but he warned me that it was dangerous beyond the gates. That was the last thing on my mind. I greedily snatched the keys from his hands, let myself through the gates and biked off into the unknown.Â
This was my third blog post for the 100 word blogging challenge. Thank you so much for reading it and I hope you liked it. Feel free to leave a comment saying what type of story would you write if you had to incorporate the five words that are in bold. Don’t forget to leave a link to your blog so that I can stop by. -Bella
Hey Bella!
I really enjoyed reading your 100 Word Challenge! I am dying to know where the character went and what’s behind the gates!! I thought your sentences were really descriptive and helped me paint a picture in my head of what was happening. If I were to write a post with those words, I think I would try to write something mysterious, kind of like yours!
-Kaylee from Longwood University
Kaylee,
Thank you so much! I am glad that you liked my post. I love the fact that you were able to have a little movie scene of the story in your head. I would love to see what you would come up with, I am sure that it would be amazing. Again, thank you for the great feedback.
-Bella
Bella,
I love how engaging this post is from start to finish. Isn’t it fabulous how quickly you can write a 100WC, include specific required words, and still infuse it with so much creativity!? It’s all the descriptive details and intentional word choice that sets this post apart…”muddy, yellow tires” and “twisted paths.” Instead of “grabbed,” you used “snatched,” which is a better option.
One thing to add for next time is a quick introduction and conclusion…explain the prompt and close out by asking a question, like we usually do. Add your name, in case someone wants to leave a comment. 🙂
Thanks again for telling a story that hooked me from the first line.
Mrs. Rombach
Mrs. Rombach,
Yes! It is weirdly easy to write 100 words, well I usually write a lot more in the beginning and have to cut it down. I am so sorry that I forgot to add some things. I will definitely try my best to catch them next time. But it also makes me so happy that you liked my story, hopefully I will post more content that hooks on readers.
Thank you so much!
-Bella