It was a Saturday afternoon, and I was flying around my home Sofia, Bulgaria looking for lunch. When I saw my friends by the cafe eating, I swooped down and joined them. As soon as I landed they scrambled the other way. I walked back over to them, then they flew away. I was overcome with sadness, I had no friends. I walked back to the cafe to see if they left me any food. When I got there, all that was left was an empty bag of potato chips. So I walked around the back of the cafe to the dumper. I was near the dumpster when all of a sudden a trash bag fell on me. I could not get up I was stuck, I screamed for my friends but no one came. It felt like a lifetime being being trapped but then a human walked out of the building next door and picked me up. I tried to get free but his grip was to strong and even if I could, I could not fly. He brought me to his house, where I was put in a cage with three other injured birds. I felt like I needed to get free, but at the same time I had a feeling that he was going to help me get better. One night he brought in a bird and as soon as he was in my sight I …
Hi Cana!
You really got me on that cliffhanger, I was so mad when I was reading and was on the edge of my bed in anticipation to see what would come next. The story was definitely unique and it immediately hooked me in because of that. I loved the beginning of the story and I hope that you are continuing it because I NEED to know what happened to the bird.
Great post,
Nadia.
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