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Let’s go!” I yelled as a slimy, blue, and alien-like monster snatched my arm. I tried to push away, but its finger dug into my arm. Along with thousands of other alien-like creatures, each held a human in their arms.
“Where are you taking us?” I cried. All of these creatures were different colors, but the orange one spoke first saying, “We won’t say anything!” I looked around to see all the people being rushed into a huge… UFO? It was at this moment I realized the human race may have just ended.
Greetings from Australia Naomi. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge. You generated interesting ideas. I could relate to having fingers digging into my arm, but not by an alien! Writing about aliens always catches a reader’s attention, and provides a point of conflict with humans. Your concern about the ending of the human race left me with lots to think about. I enjoyed reading your writing. 🙏😊
Hello Naomi, I really liked your story (although I hope this doesn’t actually happen)! The imagery is great and helps the reader understand the protagonist’s situation.