By: Cole Reemsnyder

 

I sit in my basement, alone, and my Television comes to life, and starts flashing.

Waiting for the Boys to get on,

Trying to pop a quick dub.

One by one, The boys get on,

Each with a new Strat.

We join a party, and my Mic comes to life, with the voice of the Boys,

Staying up late at night.

We enter a que, and soon randevou, and set our markers for Tilted Towers.

I jump out, get all my loot, and I am Playing Fortnite, With the boys.

 

Questions:

 

1. Sensory detail poem

 

2. My poem is an sensory detail poem, and i choose it because it is something I do often with my friends

 

3. The tone in my poem is very factual, and sometimes dark, and lonely.

 

4. The theme of my poem is playing Fortnite with my friends.

 

 

5.  In the saying “ …and my Mic comes to life, with the voice of the boys.” is an example of personification, along with when I said “…and my Television comes to life, and starts flashing”.

 

5. Personification

 

5. Figurative language helps the reader Understand the importance of some parts.

 

 

6.  I changed the name of the poem To “Fortnite with the boys” and also added “Each one with a new strat.”

 

6. It Changes the depth of the poem showing how many different possibilities there are for us to do in order to win.

 

7. It took me a few attempts and revisions to get the poem to where it is now.

8. I am Satisfied with the way my poem came out because it describes what I do when I play Fortnite with the boys.