¨Can we keep it?¨ I asked my mom
She replied, calling ¨NO!¨.
Before I had the time to reply she screams
¨Get in the car!¨ I let out a sigh that was a bit louder than usual. I kneeled on the ground as I grabbed a furry paw and held it to my chest. Then I stood up and walked away with a slouch. As I walked away every bone in my body wanted to go back. But I didn’t. I opened the car door and looked at the cute little fur ball AS IT LET OUT A PITIFUL HOWL.
Ohhhh! So, sad. What a gorgeous looking puppy. Puppies certainly have a way of melting our hearts. I think you have done a great job at showing that. I could just see the sadness in the character as they walked away and those big sad eyes of the puppy and his crying. Well done.