Elementary High school
School was so fun!
School is so stressful!
I colored.
I have 2 essays due.
I’m so hyper I could die!
I need a nap ASAP.
ahhh
I love Fridays.
Oh no, it’s Friday
No homework!
I have 3 projects due Monday
I’m going to watch Disney Channel.
Oooh, netflix.
Woahhh, Mickey mouse!
Ooooh, new Riverdale episodes.
Man, I love this show.
Ugh commercial breaks
Next episode, here I come
I’m starving
I just want two blueberries.
I could eat a horse
Mom, can I please have food
Yes Honey, what would you like me to make for you?
Go cook yourself something, your old enough!
Mom, can I have a playdate with Becky?
Mom, I’m hanging with Rachel, be back by ten.
I love seeing friends.
This is really funny and have a nice view in reality.
I liked how you showed how the difference in responsibilities between the older and younger students
The poem is over all very good but what could have been better was the ending cause it is so abrupt.
Like the figurative language whoo
I love how realistic and relateable this poem is.
Your idea is unique and interesting.