By: Nate Murphy
The game brings me joy
on and off the field
the brotherhood
last forever
like a fraternity
the love
to compete
drives me endlessly
the game is life
the connections and
friends made
become as close as family
the intense atmosphere
drives me to be perfect
the appearance of the goal
is as beautiful as a sunset
the crowd maneuvers
like ocean waves
when the game is
on the line
I want the ball
in my hands
cool as a cucumber
the game is a constant
people come and go
but the game is forever
The comparisons between lacrosse and other things were great. The vocabulary really made me understand what the true meaning of lacrosse is to you.
Lines are too short.
you’re sensory details and figurative language was very inspiring.