The Problem with Politics

By: Ashish Sakhuja

 

Loud tirades given back and forth,

New problems left unsolved,

Argument and grudges held against one another.

 

It’s chaos, its a rampage, it’s a huge mess, it’s politics,

It’s the cause of uproars within the government,

The government is swatting away our dreams,

 

The government’s failure will be our demise,

The anger will only continue to spread,

Legislators are boiling mad at each other.

 

The economy continues to crumble,

More and more problems are piling up,

The whole country is experiencing the problems,

And it’s all because of the government.

 

New enemies are made every day,

The threat toward our country continues to increase,

The leaders our developing more nuclear weapons instead of helping our citizens.

 

There has to be some change, a change that will make America great again.

 

My Missing Piece

By: Abby Luck

My mind has been awake for a while

The daunting song cried out a sad whimper

As it reverberated around me

I am a puzzle with a missing piece

The brightness of my phone filled the room in an instance

And the clamor of my ringer haunted my brain

But I close my eyes

And finally my brain rests

 

The call of my relatives wake me

I run upstairs and the news is delivered

A chill ran up my spine

The world around me is light

Happy and Content

But I am dark

But so badly I want to be light


As we leave to visit him

I feel the light consuming me

As I get more excited

When we show up, I run inside

The acidic smell of disinfectant overwhelms me

And the colorless walls surround me

I race up the newly cleaned hospital stairs

The squeak of my shoes against the floor

Fills the building quickly

And I find him

My baby brother

I feel the warmth of family on my skin

And stretch my arms out to hold him

The touch of cuddly flesh on me

My missing piece was found that day

Sunny Side Up

By: Ameera Khan

Summer.

The rays of the sun

Beating violently on my skin,

Merciless and cruel.

I look around,

Taking in my plentiful surroundings

As I continue to burn.

I see rich, forest green trees

Dancing in the cool, but scarce wind.

Smiling ever so slightly, I turn to see birds with abundant, detailed feathers,

Which seemed softer than silk,

Soaring in the baby blue sky dotted with large, white clouds,

Chirping euphonically, singing magnificently,

As if they were in a musical.

I learn that summer comes with hardships as well as boons

As long as you are willing to appreciate them.

Finally, I look up towards the light

That gives life to us

And cheerfully say to myself

“It’s as if it were a sunny side up.”

The trend I see around me

By: Jayme Matyas

I am observant as I walk the halls.

Seeing the girls and boys I once knew.

Not everyone is the same,

Of course, I know that we change as we grow up.

Becoming wiser as the many years rush away, though some may not.

The social pressures are changing and are, perhaps, getting worse.

The faces and names that I once called friends, now barely recognizable under a whole new person, someone that gave in to the social pressures.

Those people, may or may not be happy with the choice they have made to give in to the pressures, but will keep up the image so they will gain favor by other people.

The pressure is not only coming from teachers and friends at school, but social media, other friends, and even family.

The pressures coming from those sources are as powerful as ever in this world and is waiting to grasp another person and bring them into a hole of darkness and despair.

People who hesitate and question their looks, behavior, or popularity and that is when people will use that against them to change them, and that comes from pictures on social media that lead to people trying to achieve something not realistic.

We need to see and learn about this so we can stop the pressures, that are making so many people miserable and feel bad about themselves.

Ode To A Book

By Sneha Rajaraman

I see you

lurking on the

brown, dusty

shelves.

The one

who provides

beautiful hallucinations

to one’s mind.

 

You are

the inspiration

to children,

laughing as

they hear you.

Your bright, vibrant

words, shown

With your

imagination,

your inspiring thoughts,

endless

as they turn

the pages.

 

For many,

you are their

elixir of relaxation

for their glum

is never

caused by you.

 

As alluring as

the most beautiful

lavender flowers

As soft as the

softest pillows

You are like

music notes

wistfully flowing

as our youths

fall asleep,

dreaming in their

somnolent slumber.

 

You help them

imagine,

beckoning to them

“Open Me!”

For what

you carry

is not just

a welcoming cover

but an offering,

the gift of story

 

You feel this,

the texture

of soft paper

flitting through their

fingers

as their

senses of imagination

come from

your felicity,

as your incipient,

conflating words

only lead to

A sumptuous ending,

one that calms you

for the satisfaction

of books.

 

Reflection

1.Which poem type did you publish?

I published an Ode.

2f. Why did you choose the subject of your ode?

I chose to write an ode about books because I feel that books should get a lot more appreciation than they currently recieve. Books are one of the main things that provide inspiration so I felt that this was a good topic.

3. What is the tone of your poem?

The tone of my poem is awestruck as I am explaining how books make people feel wonderful and in awe.

4. What is the theme of your poem?

The theme of my poem is to never forget about the small things in life that inspire bigger things. Books inspire people to write more or try new things. While they may not seem like something big, but in the long run, they make a big difference.

5. Choose TWO examples of figurative language in the poem.

a. Like music notes wistfully flowing

b. This is a simile.

c. This helps the reader understand how calm but wonderful this makes people feel. Music notes convey a sense of peace and satisfaction, also giving a person a sense of awe in the music, exactly what I am trying to say in my poem about books.

d. ‘…beckoning to them, “Open Me”….’

e. This is personification.

f. This helps the reader understand that books are somewhat appealing in the sense that what a person sees from the book lures or inspires them to take and read the book, therefore forming a sense of satisfaction as they go through.

6. What are two specific ways you revised this poem?

a. I changed “yelling” to “beckoning”.

b. I changed “feel” to “texture”.

7. How easy or difficult was it to write this poem? Why?

While writing this poem, I thought this was somewhat easy because I seemed to bounce off a lot of ideas based on what I already had and didn’t have to think a lot about them.

8. How satisfied are you with your final draft? Explain.

I am very satisfied with my poem because I thought this correctly represented the way I feel about books; illuminating and relaxing.

Ode To Softball

By Audrey Hood

I picked you up for the first time

When I was only five years old.

From the moment I started

I knew it was right, as if it was destiny.

You were with me when my father was trying

To teach me how to throw a ball for the first time.

You were with me when I had my first game

And was learning the ropes of softball.

 

You were with me all my years of house league and travel softball.

You were with me even when my team was

Constantly changing like a revolving door.

You were with me for all my games, even if I won or lost.

You traveled with me all over the East coast when I had tournaments.

You were there for all my late weeknight practices

When I probably should’ve been doing homework.

 

You were like the rock in my life

That was always there for me.

You were one of my closests companions

Who helped me make my plays and my outs.

You were the one thing I could look forward to everyday

like a toy to a kid.

 

Now you’re like an old family member.

You’re something I take for granted sometimes

But I will always love.

Even when I don’t have practice

I pull you out and grab a softball to throw with

Just because I love the game.

 

You have become a lifestyle

Not a hobby.

You are something I don’t ever have to doubt.

When I have a glove and a ball in my hand

I am my most confident and best self.

You’re one of the most concrete things in my life.

 

Softball has become my home.

 

  1. The poem I published was an ode poem.
  2. I chose softball as the subject of my ode poem because I have been playing softball for almost ten years of my life. I have also found that softball has been my best stress reliever through middle school because it is something I will always be good at.
  3. The tone of my poem is a mix between heartfelt and appreciation because this ode poem is showing my gratitude towards my ability to play the game.
  4. The theme of my poem is that if you find something you love, you should work hard to be your very best at it.
  5. “You were like the rock in my life” is a simile that shows that softball was always something I had in my life and “Now you’re like an old friend” is also a simile that shows that I have grown comfortable with softball through the years of playing it.
  6. I changed “tournaments” to “games” so that there wouldn’t be unwanted repetition and “friend” to “companion” for a more elegant word.
  7. It was pretty easy to write this poem because I didn’t have to think about why I love the game of softball or having the ability to play softball.
  8. I am very satisfied with my poem because it reminds me of all the reasons why I love softball.

Falling Down

By Matthew Hembrador

 

 

I’m dying inside

Everything inside is aflame.

There is no breeze as I descend.

I’m falling.

The feeling of neglect like a withering plant

Like an abandoned toy.

Was messed around with no care.

I’m falling

I was a sword being put to good use

Become dull and was discarded.

I forged a new blade

Only to be screaming as I shatter.

Thrown into a furnace

Only to feel the fire again.

Plunged into the dark abyss walking aimlessly

I want to get out

I can’t get out

But I go back to the start

Finally waking up with a sense of relief.

But reality cannot be remolded.

My soul is being corrupted.

My soul is at disarray.

I’m empty like a hollow shell.

I’m falling down

To see the fiery hell

Why can it not stop

It’s never ending

I want to rest

I want to be released from these chains

My life was twisted

Looping back to where I started

But now I can sleep

And be at ease.

CRACK

 

Reflection

 

  1. I wrote an Emotion Poem.
  2. I chose to write on depression because it gives me the feeling that life isn’t fair.
  3. The tone of this story is melancholy.
  4. The theme of the poem is that you can’t recover from everything.
  5. “I was a sword being put to good use, became dull and was discarded,” is a metaphor comparing a person with a sword. This figurative language contributes to the poem because it shows that the person thought he had a purpose, to only find out that he was being used.
  6. One revision I did was adding “I’m falling,” to show that the character’s problem is getting worse. Another revision I did was change “a mess” to “disarray” to deepen the vocabulary.
  7. Writing this poem wasn’t hard or easy, because the poem was able to flow, but coming up with the story got me caught up a bit.
  8. I’m satisfied with the final draft because the poem turned out a lot better than I thought it was going to be.

 

Ode to Tom Hanks

Nuvin Bazid

61 years of age

Six feet and sage

Thomas Jeffrey Hanks

I felt the need to say thanks

You have so much masculinity

You make me question my sanity

I’d travel many miles

Just to see your smile

You’re as iconic as Olivia Wilde

You are as pure as a child

You have no room in your heart for hate

You will forever be great

You have so many wrinkles

Your eyes are as bright as diamonds, always have a twinkle

You’re amazing from your big round nose

All the way down to your old man toes

I will always love your iconic movies

I love them like sweet strawberry smoothies

You are as cool as ice

Your attitude is always nice

Your smile is as bright as the sun

You’re as sweet as a cinnamon bun

You’re as unappreciated as milk

Your hair is as smooth as silk

I love your movie, “The Post”

Except, I love “Forrest Gump” the most

If I meet you one day

I know exactly what I’ll say

I will start off with a plea

“Please adopt me”

Poetry Publication Reflection

 

Copy and paste this table into your blog post. Respond in complete sentences.

 

Questions Responses
  1. Which poem type did you publish?
The type of poem I decided to publish is an ode.
  1. Answer the ONE question that goes with your poem type:
    1. Emotion Poem: Why did you choose this emotion?
    2. Sensory detail Poem: Why did you choose this event as the basis for your poem?
    3. Inspired by poem: What was the source of your inspiration (poem, song, issue)? Why?
    4. Nature/environment poem: Why did you choose this environment?
    5. Allegory: What is the literal meaning (story)? What is the figurative meaning?
    6. Ode: Why did you choose the subject of your ode?
I chose the subject of my ode because I think Tom Hanks is a great man and deserves to be appreciated.
  1. What is the tone of your poem?
The tone of my poem is admiring.
  1. What is the theme of your poem?
The theme of my poem is Tom Hanks is a great man.
  1. Choose TWO examples of figurative language in the poem.
  1. Quote the figurative language: An example of figurative language I used in my poem is, “You’re as unappreciated as milk.”
  2. Type of figurative language: The type of figurative language is simile.
  3. Explain how this figurative language contributes to tone and theme development: This figurative language shows that he is one of those small things in life you don’t take the time to  appreciate .
  1. Quote the figurative language: An example of figurative language I used in my poem is, “You’re as sweet as a cinnamon bun”
  2. Type of figurative language: The type of figurative language is simile.
  3. Explain how this figurative language contributes to tone and theme development: It shows that Tom is sweet and lovable, like a cinnamon bun.
  1. What are two specific ways you revised this poem? (Example: “I changed “happy” to “content.”) Why did you make these revisions?
Revision #1:”Your eyes are as bright as diamonds, always have a twinkle”

Explanation: I accidentally said “has” instead of “have.” I had forgotten that since “eyes” is plural, it has to be have.

Revision #2:”You’re as iconic as Olivia Wilde”

Explanation: I had originally used Adele but it didn’t rhyme with child.

  1. How easy or difficult was it to write this poem? Why?
It was very easy to write this poem because i had so much to say about him.
  1. How satisfied are you with your final draft? Explain.
I am very satisfied with how my poem ended up because it shows exactly what I wanted to say.

 

Fortnite with the boys

By: Cole Reemsnyder

 

I sit in my basement, alone, and my Television comes to life, and starts flashing.

Waiting for the Boys to get on,

Trying to pop a quick dub.

One by one, The boys get on,

Each with a new Strat.

We join a party, and my Mic comes to life, with the voice of the Boys,

Staying up late at night.

We enter a que, and soon randevou, and set our markers for Tilted Towers.

I jump out, get all my loot, and I am Playing Fortnite, With the boys.

 

Questions:

 

  1. Sensory detail poem

 

  1. My poem is an sensory detail poem, and i choose it because it is something I do often with my friends

 

  1. The tone in my poem is very factual, and sometimes dark, and lonely.

 

  1. The theme of my poem is playing Fortnite with my friends.

 

 

  1.  In the saying “ …and my Mic comes to life, with the voice of the boys.” is an example of personification, along with when I said “…and my Television comes to life, and starts flashing”.

 

  1. Personification

 

  1. Figurative language helps the reader Understand the importance of some parts.

 

 

  1.  I changed the name of the poem To “Fortnite with the boys” and also added “Each one with a new strat.”

 

  1. It Changes the depth of the poem showing how many different possibilities there are for us to do in order to win.

 

  1. It took me a few attempts and revisions to get the poem to where it is now.

8. I am Satisfied with the way my poem came out because it describes what I do when I play Fortnite with the boys.

Victory

Victory

 

By Miles Lang

 

I am inspired by Victory

You put effort in to accomplish

You never give up and fight through problems

The feeling is like no other

Victory is unique

It means so much to win to some people

But to others Victory is just a word

It doesn’t matter how you see you

It shows endeavor, expertise, and accomplishment

Victory is a feeling of greatness

Victory is the symbol of power

 

 

Questions Responses
  1. Which poem type did you publish?
Inspired by poem
  1. Answer the ONE question that goes with your poem type:
    1. Emotion Poem: Why did you choose this emotion?
    2. Sensory detail Poem: Why did you choose this event as the basis for your poem?
    3. Inspired by poem: What was the source of your inspiration (poem, song, issue)? Why?
    4. Nature/environment poem: Why did you choose this environment?
    5. Allegory: What is the literal meaning (story)? What is the figurative meaning?
    6. Ode: Why did you choose the subject of your ode?
The source of my inspiration is a word and the word is Victory, this inspires me because it is a strong and meaningful word to me.
  1. What is the tone of your poem?
Motivating
  1. What is the theme of your poem?
Put all effort in and never give up.
  1. Choose TWO examples of figurative language in the poem.
  1. Quote the figurative language: “Victory is a feeling of greatness”
  2. Type of figurative language: Metaphor
  3. Explain how this figurative language contributes to tone and theme development: The tone is supposed to motivate you and make you feel positive and greatness is a very positive word.
  1. Quote the figurative language: “The feeling is like no other”
  2. Type of figurative language: Hyperbole
  3. Explain how this figurative language contributes to tone and theme development: I’m trying to make the feeling sound amazing and like nothing you’ve ever felt so people get motivated to feel it.
  1. What are two specific ways you revised this poem? (Example: “I changed “happy” to “content.”) Why did you make these revisions?
Revision #1:

Explanation: I changed effort to endeavor

Revision #2:

Explanation: I changed skill to expertise

  1. How easy or difficult was it to write this poem? Why?
Easy because I have won a lot of things and I’ve always wanted to share the feeling with people that havent won.
  1. How satisfied are you with your final draft? Explain.
I’m pretty satisfied because it shows good detail with a lot of description words and its really easy to figure out the tone and theme of the poem.