By Emily DuBois

You walk into nature

You smell fresh scents all around you

You still have the sweet taste of honeysuckle in your mouth

You hear the birds tweeting

The sound of your feet snapping the branches

You see the beautiful trees and the different colors of flowers

As you look into the distance

You see the landscape of The mountains and ocean

You feel safe

You feel calm like the delicate white bunny you see in the distance

You now understand

The beauty of nature

You now understand

How the you can be inspired by the smallest things



Reflection

I chose to publish my inspired by poem.
The source of my inspiration was nature because when ever I need to think or be inspired I will go somewhere with lots of nature
The tone of my poem was peaceful
The theme of my poem was to take a look at the smaller things in life
One example of figurative language is “you still have the sweet taste of honeysuckle in your mouth” which used sensory details. Another example of figurative language is “You feel calm like the delicate white bunny in the distance” which is a simile.
I revised my poem by changing “the peaceful rabbit” to the “white bunny” and adding “You still have the sweet taste of honeysuckle in your mouth”
While it was challenging to start the poem I felt that after I had the first couple of lines done that it flowed very easily.
I feel satisfied with my draph because I did my best I could and made sure to edit my grammer and had two people help revise.