By: Evan Sutherlin

Ali-A to me is like a bird to a tree

His videos give me hope

His positivity makes him great

Ali-A to me is like a bee to honey

He is really brisk

There is no need to hate him

Ali-A to me is like a dog to a puppy

He builds me up

He Never fails my expectations

Ali-A to me is scar to a John Wick

His fortnite videos fill me with hope

And thats why he’s really dope

Ali-A to me is a like a moth to a flame

His videos are really splendid

He is my companion

Ali-A to me is like a mouse to a PC

This is why I like Ali-A

He is really a good person you can see

He could build a city

Ali-A to me

1. I published an ode

2. I chose the subject of my ode because Ali-A is very important to me

3.The tone is positivity

4.The theme is Ali-A

5.The First figurative launguage is “Ali-A to me is like a bird to a tree” This is a simile, this supports the tone because it shows that i like Ali-A as much as a bird would like a tree.  My second figurative language is “Ali-A to me is lioke a dog to a puppy” this is a simile, this supports the tone because it shows that Ali-A and me have a bond like a dog and a puppy

6. The first revision is I changed great to splended for stronger word choice. The second revision I made was I changed mate to companion for stronger word choice.

7. It was pretty easy because its not hard to talk well about Ali-A.

8. I Am satisfieded with my final draft because it looks great and it sounds great and its rhymes are very good.