I saw you at Best Buy

You looked so confuzzled of why you were being sold from your manufacturer’s

You were the perfect match for me

We met eye to 14 inch TN panel

Though you weren’t perfect

I still accepted you for who you are

I was busy though

I had other things to focus on

I left you in the depths of my closet

The nice black and red finish like a ladybug

Bzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzh…..

The fan started spinning fast like a hotwheels car

The dust had been swept off

It was back in business

Though the display so nice and bright was still rusty

All of its parts came together to form a beautiful piece of art

Handcrafted by the best

Your fans stopped spinning

Your display shut close

Warm and comfortable in the heat of my arms

I will never leave you lonely again

I love you

1.An Ode

2.I chose the subject of my ode because it’s something I love

3.The tone of my poem is jubilant/wistful

4.I changed “Left in the depths of my closets” to “Left you in the depths of my closet”.

5.”The fan started spinning fast like a hotwheels car” Similie. It contributes to the tone of the story because it shows the laptop was being used and wasn’t in the dark anymore. “The nice black and red finish like a ladybug”. This doesn’t contribute to the tone of the story but it gives a picture of how the laptop looks like.

6.One

7.This poem was pretty easy to write because it was something I had a lot of interest in

8.Yes, I’m satisfied because I think that I made a good amount of edits and revisions