Victory
By Miles Lang
I am inspired by Victory
You put effort in to accomplish
You never give up and fight through problems
The feeling is like no other
Victory is unique
It means so much to win to some people
But to others Victory is just a word
It doesn’t matter how you see you
It shows endeavor, expertise, and accomplishment
Victory is a feeling of greatness
Victory is the symbol of power
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- Which poem type did you publish?
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Inspired by poem |
- Answer the ONE question that goes with your poem type:
- Emotion Poem: Why did you choose this emotion?
- Sensory detail Poem: Why did you choose this event as the basis for your poem?
- Inspired by poem: What was the source of your inspiration (poem, song, issue)? Why?
- Nature/environment poem: Why did you choose this environment?
- Allegory: What is the literal meaning (story)? What is the figurative meaning?
- Ode: Why did you choose the subject of your ode?
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The source of my inspiration is a word and the word is Victory, this inspires me because it is a strong and meaningful word to me. |
- What is the tone of your poem?
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Motivating |
- What is the theme of your poem?
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Put all effort in and never give up. |
- Choose TWO examples of figurative language in the poem.
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- Quote the figurative language: “Victory is a feeling of greatness”
- Type of figurative language: Metaphor
- Explain how this figurative language contributes to tone and theme development: The tone is supposed to motivate you and make you feel positive and greatness is a very positive word.
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- Quote the figurative language: “The feeling is like no other”
- Type of figurative language: Hyperbole
- Explain how this figurative language contributes to tone and theme development: I’m trying to make the feeling sound amazing and like nothing you’ve ever felt so people get motivated to feel it.
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- What are two specific ways you revised this poem? (Example: “I changed “happy” to “content.”) Why did you make these revisions?
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Revision #1:
Explanation: I changed effort to endeavor |
Revision #2:
Explanation: I changed skill to expertise |
- How easy or difficult was it to write this poem? Why?
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Easy because I have won a lot of things and I’ve always wanted to share the feeling with people that havent won. |
- How satisfied are you with your final draft? Explain.
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I’m pretty satisfied because it shows good detail with a lot of description words and its really easy to figure out the tone and theme of the poem. |
I like the words you changed into final draft