One thought on “A380”

1. Majestic you are

   With your immense wings

   Big like the ocean

   Your engines roaring

   Like a lion claiming

   It’s throne

   Ruling over the skies

   The biggest of them all

   With you luxurious cabin

   Like a mansion in the air

   Making everyone change

   To be good enough for you

   Topping your enemies

   With an easy flick of a switch

   All the others

   Wishing to be you

   But none come close

   You are truly

   Ruler of all

   The skies

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   The type of poem i wrote is ode.
   I chose an Airbus A380 because i love airplanes and the a380 is my favorite.
   The tone of my poem is glorious.
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   “With your wings big like the ocean” “your engines roaring like a lion claiming it’s throne”.
   1 specific way i edited my poem is i changed “with an easy” to “with an easy flick of a switch”. Also i changed ‘all others wishing to be you” to “all others wishing to be you but none come close”.
   This poem was very easy for me to write because i love airplanes.
   I feel fairly confident with my final draft because i tried to add as much figurative language as i could

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