By: Annabelle Perry
Another day
friends and peers in every corner
the halls screaming with colors
teachers enjoying their morning coffee
and kids laughing,
but noises start buzzing
through my head
and throughout the halls like screaming children
People panicked and ran
from a dark storm
they never saw coming
Well that took a dark turn.
I like how your story starts off happy and then takes an unexpected turn
I like how you used your line spacing to create suspense