By: Evan Sutherlin
Ali-A to me is like a bird to a tree
His videos give me hope
His positivity makes him great
Ali-A to me is like a bee to honey
He is really brisk
There is no need to hate him
Ali-A to me is like a dog to a puppy
He builds me up
He Never fails my expectations
Ali-A to me is scar to a John Wick
His fortnite videos fill me with hope
And thats why he’s really dope
Ali-A to me is a like a moth to a flame
His videos are really splendid
He is my companion
Ali-A to me is like a mouse to a PC
This is why I like Ali-A
He is really a good person you can see
He could build a city
Ali-A to me
1. I published an ode
2. I chose the subject of my ode because Ali-A is very important to me
3.The tone is positivity
4.The theme is Ali-A
5.The First figurative launguage is “Ali-A to me is like a bird to a tree” This is a simile, this supports the tone because it shows that i like Ali-A as much as a bird would like a tree. My second figurative language is “Ali-A to me is lioke a dog to a puppy” this is a simile, this supports the tone because it shows that Ali-A and me have a bond like a dog and a puppy
6. The first revision is I changed great to splended for stronger word choice. The second revision I made was I changed mate to companion for stronger word choice.
7. It was pretty easy because its not hard to talk well about Ali-A.
8. I Am satisfieded with my final draft because it looks great and it sounds great and its rhymes are very good.
Good job on your poem
Lots of figurative language
Great job with the use of analogies