By: Manal Trombati
I shivered as I went through the long line
Snaking around and around
It felt like an eternity for others
But for me,
Time flew
I was pressured to go along
But then,
I hadn’t noticed,
The fate that awaited me
I finally arrived to conquer my fears
My palms sweating as I walked up
My heart racing as I questioned if I was safe
“But what if I wasn’t safe?” I thought
“Thump, Thump, Thump” was my heart racing
Each step I took felt cold,
Lifeless even
I reached the top
The wind whistling in my ears
All I had to do was take one step
And I’ll softly land
I took that step
To conquer my fears
Then swiftly landed to safety
I like how you described the line and how you felt before you got on the ride.
I particularly like the part where you questioned your safety in your mind, while asking the question.