Justice Letter

Justice Store
22000 Dulles Retail Plaza
Sterling, VA 20166

Dear Justice:

A few years ago, I finally found a jumpsuit at your store that matched my style. This jumpsuit is short and has laces at the top. The style was very attractive. I was so happy that I couldn’t wait to wear it, but I saved it for a day at the beach. A day before I went to the beach, I decided to try on the jumpsuit before I packed it into my suitcase. Then, just as I gently pulled the lacing over my shoulders, one of the shoulder laces snapped!

I was devastated because I was really looking forward to wearing that jumpsuit on the beach. I hadn’t even pulled hard on the laces; I was very careful. When I looked at the wrecked lace, I realized that the problem arose due to the fault of your stitching. The laces were stitched on too loose and carelessly; by the time I put on my dress, they completely came apart! I am very disappointed in the quality of your stitching! The dress that I paid full price for didn’t even last a few seconds. It separated and now I cannot even wear it anymore before finding a way to stitch it back myself.

I do have to commend your store for its fabulous model, though. The fashionable model and the colors of the jumpsuit went together and looked adorable. I just wish I had a chance to wear these adorable clothes and show them to others before they rip apart because of the stitching issues. The quality of the clothing I received from your store is terrible; it doesn’t have any relation to the price of the jumpsuit.

I wanted to let you know that you should improve the quality of your clothing so that they can last long. I would propose taking the time to focus more of your budget on creating the clothing instead of designing it, because I feel that the designs of your clothing are already getting an abundant amount of attention. In fact, that is the best part of your clothing!

If you advertise your improved stitching quality, I am sure that many others will be interested in buying your clothes. I have a few friends who have also had similar issues about your clothing, and I believe that taking this suggestion into consideration would be really beneficial to both your store and your customers. My friends all agree that the quality of the stitching in your clothing is the only thing that keeps them from buying more clothing from your store, anymore. After all, Justice has the best designs, but just needs to have better quality to become even more successful. Thank you so much for taking the time to read this and taking my improvements into consideration!

Sincerely,

Sreya Palnati

Every New Beginning Comes From Some Other Beginning’s End.

Personal Narrative                                                                   
                                                                                                        
Every New Beginning Comes From Some Other Beginning’s End.

I was born in the capital city of the Dominican Republic, Santo Domingo. It’s the biggest city in the country, with a population just over 2 million. The Dominican Republic is a tropical country, where the sun is always up and shining till the night (except in the rainy season). I used to be a typical Dominican girl with a busy schedule, full of social activities and very involved in my school activities. I used to be my teacher’s assistant; I helped grading exams, organizing classes, etc. I was also my class President, so I had a lot of responsibilities on my shoulders. I had to plan all the social activities and also the fund raisers. Being the Class President is not as fun as you might imagine, as I had to play many roles, needing to be democratic and participatory, but also authoritarian or bossy- but always fair.

I loved my life; I had the greatest feeling, when you know that you have all that you need: love, family and friends that become like family. I used to love going to school, every day would bring a new lesson or adventure. Sometimes it seemed hard, especially when we had to have our monthly meeting to schedule our activities as a classroom, but at the end of the day, it turned into happiness. When I got back home my grandmother was always there waiting for me to set the table. We used to have lunch together while we watched a show called “Caso Cerrado” (Case Closed) which was a part of the day we couldn’t miss. Every day always ended up with homework. Finally, though, the most expected day of the week: Friday would arrive, which were always fun and exciting. My friends and I used to do a variety of things, going to an ice cream parlor or we could end up partying till “sunrise” which was really till midnight.

I am pretty sure that I will never forget these moments that have become  memories that will last forever. I especially miss my girlfriends and hope that even though they are far we can still keep the connection between us.  

My life new life begins with a new culture, new challenges, and new goals. This is what life is based on, changes.  We all have experienced an unwanted change, in my case it was for my own benefit. It all started when I moved to Virginia; at first, I wasn’t excited, I barely talked about it, as long days were passing by, the sadder I would be. In the meantime, I was enjoying my last months with all my friends, partying, hanging out and eating brunches. The day “finally” arrived; packing, letters, tears and sadness surrounded my room.  When I first arrived, it felt like I was on summer vacation, just like another usual summer, going out and having fun. As the days passed by and the “Back to School” date got closer, I didn’t realize it was really going to happen until I bought my school supplies.

In my opinion, everything happens for a reason. Sure, everybody says that, but do they believe it? I do. Everything has a purpose, which I still need to find – it will be a journey, not always amusing one, but uplifting nonetheless. Finally, as my grandmother says, “At the end of the journey everything will take its place.” Caso Cerrado.
                                                                                          

A Joyous Day

A Joyous Day

Chirp, chirp. Bright and early in the morning the birds started to sing. Their beautiful song filling the air like a fluffy cloud in the light blue sky. It was eight o’clock on a Saturday and Lisette was getting ready to attend her cousin Courtney’s sweet sixteen. She got up, washed her face and shrugged into her aqua green dress. The dress fit Lisette perfectly around her waist. It was a birthday gift from her aunt and she had been asked to wear it during the party. Even though the party didn’t start until seven o’clock at night, she couldn’t wait to try it on just once.

Lisette ran down the steps to the kitchen. Her parents and older brother had already eaten their breakfast at the table and were cleaning up. 

“Good morning everyone.” Lisette announced happily. 

“Good morning Lisette,” Her mom and dad replied in unison. Her brother Clark just nodded his head as a hello. As they got up, Lisette sat down. Clark exited the kitchen to his room, her mom was getting started on the dishes, and her dad was reading the newspaper. She had a huge grin on her face. She couldn’t wait to go to Courtney’s party. She’s never been to one as a matter of fact. Her friends all just turned fifteen and she was still waiting for her turn in July. 

“So are you excited to go to Courtney’s party?” her mother asked. 

“Definitely,” she replied. “You  know the aqua green dress Aunt Becky got me for my birthday?”
Her mother nodded. 

“Well, I really want to wear it for the first time at her party,” Lisette said. “You know, since it’s the first time I’ll be going to one.”

“Of course you can sweetie,” her mom said. “I’m just worried you’ll spill something on it and stain it. 

“Don’t worry, I won’t.” Lisette promised. She helped her mom with the dishes, and then put them away. She ran up to her room and started reading and drawing, counting the hours till the party. She even fell asleep for two hours!

“Lisette!” her mom called out. “It’s time to go!”

“Coming!” Lisette replied while going down the steps with caution. She really didn’t want anything to happen to her new dress. She had others she liked, but this one had to be her favorite.

It was seven o’clock and the sun was setting. Its colors were fading away slowly, as if it was the last time you would ever see it. Lisette and her family walked outside greeted with a cool breeze hitting their faces. The lights from their house raided with moths, causing their shadows to dance in the dark.

An hour late they arrived. There was light shining through all the large windows in the house. Lisette knew the party had already started. She took a deep breath. They all walked toward the front door and were greeted by a middle aged woman with her hair in a bun. 

“Hello Jane, Andrew, Clark, Lisette,” aunt Becky said looking at all of us. “Come in it’s cold outside. Come in.”

Lisette walked inside and started looking around at all the decorations hung up on the walls. “Whoa,” she said in awe. She stood near her parents and in an instant they disappeared, but she didn’t care. She knew her aunt’s house inside and out. 

“Lisette!” Courtney yelled. Lisette turned around and looked at Courtney across the room with a smile a mile wide. She walked towards Courtney with a swing in her step. This is going to be fun, she thought. 

The Cycles of the Seasons


 The Cycles of the Seasons
Winter’s snow brings cold
Raging blizzards, storms of hailing ice
And yet beautiful.
Spring is a rebirth
From the barren and icy grounds
Of the long gone winter.
Summer introduces us
To the feelings of freedom
And joys of old friends.
Autumn is subtle
Changing slowly, unnoticed
Until winter storms forth.

Star-Crossed Lovers in a Senseless Society

Star-Crossed Lovers in a Senseless Society

“Eleanor was right. She never looked nice. She looked like art, and art wasn’t supposed to look nice; it was supposed to make you feel something.”

This quote comes from Rainbow Rowell’s book Eleanor and Park, a romance novel revolving around a sarcastic, red-haired girl and an introverted half-Korean boy. At the beginning, the chemistry between these two misfits is very sweet, and I enjoyed every breath of it. However, the book goes downhill when the lovers become serious with their relationship, especially since the story takes place over a year. Many flaws in this book have confirmed that this novel wasn’t my favorite, but it was definitely unlike anything I’ve ever read before.

The biggest and most disconcerting obstacle in Eleanor and Park was its constant use of profanity. Upon reading the first five pages, I found about twelve nasty words scribbled hastily in dialogue before flipping to the next chapter. Though the setting takes place primarily in a high school in the 1980’s, I feel like the author is making an unfortunate excuse to press her anger into each of the pages, screaming the f-word repetitively through her characters’ thoughts. She may think that it seems more realistic this way, but personally I think it makes the characters less enjoyable to be around. Therefore the vulgar language was completely superfluous, and I think that this book would have been more satisfying if it weren’t for the author being as tempered as a toddler, flicking the f-word all over the place.

Another flaw that made me uncomfortable was the author’s tendency to be racist towards Asians. Park is part of one of the only Asian families in his neighborhood, making him a minor target for being different from the rest. I agree that racism is still a problem in today’s world, and I understand that Rowell wants to address this problem to her audience. But rather than resolving the situation herself, she simply mocks the Asian accent and expresses feelings that should have stuck to her rough draft. Her constant reminder of Park’s mom pronouncing Eleanor’s name as “El-la-no” frustrates me, as if she didn’t need to remind me twenty times to get the gist of how differently Park’s mom spoke from the rest. Also, at the start and end of the book, Eleanor regards Park as a “stupid Asian kid”. Whether Rowell means this and her other open thoughts playfully or seriously, it doesn’t improve the plot any further from its original state.

Thirdly, the book had a few plot holes that I was really unsatisfied with. What happened to Eleanor’s family after Eleanor ran away? Richie is the only one who seems to live in the house after the incident, and there are no signs of Eleanor’s siblings or her mom after the fight. I was anxious to know where they had gone, or if they had met Eleanor in the future, but unfortunately I was never given the answer to what will forever be a vague ending. Also, if Richie wrote vulgar insults in Eleanor’s books, how did he get to her locker in the first place? Eleanor told Park that the insults appeared after her Gym class, and it seems very unlikely that Richie would suddenly barge into the school and somehow locate the girls’ locker room deliberately. How did Richie get in and cram Eleanor’s new clothes in the toilet? Since he is Eleanor’s stepdad, it makes completely no sense and desperately needs a logical revision.

The main idea of romance captivated me early into the story, but as the plot progressed, there seemed to be something off about it that made me change my mind. The timing was unreasonably hastened, and even though Park is awkward, wouldn’t he have chosen a more appropriate time to confess his love for Eleanor? At the time their relationship was only starting to bloom, and I believe that Park went a little overboard. The author may attempt to sound realistic in this aspect of the story as well, but I think that it would have been more reasonable if Park was a little more careful about what he said, since this is after all his “first love”.

In addition, there were many imbalances in the story. Sloppy, disproportioned transitions between Park and Eleanor were made frequently throughout the story, and it was hard to keep up since some viewpoints lasted 3 pages and others lasted a few sentences. The author tries too hard to sound simple, because it makes readers juggle a deep pile of thoughts and fluctuating perspectives. Although Eleanor and Park had a steady relationship throughout the book, it saddened me to see that Eleanor never truly admitted that she loved Park, because Park had told her multiple times that he loved her to soothe her insecurities.

Lastly, the parents of both families failed to be good role models in the story. All of the fathers in the story either use vulgar language, drink, or provide too much freedom excessively. The mothers are calmer and wiser, but there are no major spotlights for them in the book other than restricting the lovers from doing what they want. An example of unreasonable parenting is Park’s dad. He allows Park to drive Eleanor to Minnesota in the middle of the night, but he restricts Park from wearing eyeliner? Park’s dad probably wanted to prevent Park from wearing eyeliner to avoid attention at school, but if Park’s dad provides that much freedom for Park and his girlfriend, then he should definitely be more easygoing about something as simple as eyeliner.

In spite of all of the book’s imperfections, only a few portions have truly contented me. The plot, despite its adult-like tone, was engrossing, and I had finished this book over two days’ time. Some peaks in the story included the semi-creative flirting between Eleanor and Park, but clichés such as “I can’t live without you,” and “I can’t breathe without you,” were little things that made me cringe. However, the fact that they avoided the “it’s not good-bye” cliché was unexpectedly impressive. The most stunning part overall was that this book captured real-life situations that people are still facing today, like family pressure and bullying, overlapping the romance just before it became too boring and mushy to handle.

Lakes Can Be Amazing

Lakes Can Be Amazing


After weeks of preparation and logistics, as well as hours of travel, my father and I, along with 7 other members in our Boy Scout troop, arrived at the Charles L. Sommers canoe base in Ely, Minnesota for a 7-day canoe trip in the boundary waters between Canada and the United states. This base is part of the Northern Tier High Adventure Program. We had watched the movies, and seen the wallpapers, but now it was time to experience nature for real. Charles L. Sommers was in the middle of nowhere; there was nothing but crisp pine trees and lakes for miles around. After we checked in, the staff members handed us our gear, gave us a short orientation, and showed us our cabins for the night. We would leave early in the morning.

My dad said the packs we were taking were heavy, but I never thought how heavy. Each crew of 9 people get around 6 large packs to carry all the personal gear, food, supplies, and cooking utensils needed for the trip. Everything was carried with you, including the canoes. This worried me a lot, especially since the 90-pound burden almost made me fall over immediately. By the time we launched our canoes into the lake, our whole crews’ backs were already aching. We would be experiencing that feeling a lot throughout our trip.

Paddling on a crystal clear lake is probably one of the most peaceful things to do on the Earth. The water stretches for miles, and the only sound you can hear is your paddle dipping in, then out. Bald eagles skim the surface of the lake, hunting for the large fish swimming in the shallows. However, the land approaches as the water ends, and the weak of heart go back to the canoe base. Our crew had other ideas…

There is an opening in the evergreen forest, with a narrow, rough trail lying inside it. If we wanted to get the miles on this trip, it all started at this portage. Taking up our packs, and lifting the canoes over our heads, we trekked past the point of no return and struggled to the next lake. I came to dread these “portages”, carrying all our heavy gear and canoes on land, but it was necessary to get to the places we wanted to go to. Step by step, I carried my pack down halfway through the trail before I stumbled, slipped on a rock and fell backwards. Dazed, yet determined, I used all my strength to get back on my feet and continue onwards. The only driving motivation in a portage is the water you can see at the other side.

Since these lakes are hard to reach, and isolated, the fishing there was probably the best you can get this side of the Western Hemisphere. We caught 20-30 inch Pike, Bass, and Lake Trout as easily as those fishing toy games. On the second day, my friend Seth had a 31-inch Northern Pike on the line as soon as he had reeled in another fish! I was surprised, because the lakes are so vast and deep you would think the fish would be spread out far and few in between. There were no complaints, though, as fried fish was the best remedy for an aching body.

The third day was one of the longest and hardest days of the trip, especially for my dad. While doing a rough, steep portage, my dad, who was carrying the canoe, stumbles and shouts in pain. He had torn one of his upper groin muscles! This didn’t injure him to the point of calling off the trip, but he had to take ibuprofen every day after. It would take a good month after the incident for him to fully recover.

On reaching our fourth day of the trip, we paddled to Lake MacIntyre, the halfway point in our canoe route. By then, our crew had travelled over 40 miles and portaged around 13 times. To make it back to the canoe base in time, we took a route around one of the large lakes and started heading home. The weather was perfect for five days straight, until a huge storm hit us early in the morning. As soon as the first drop fell, I woke up my tent mates and rushed to put the rainfly over our shelter. Lightning flashed over the lake at around 100 times a minute. It was like someone was shining a strobe light over the whole world! Not to mention the pouring rain and screaming wind. None of us slept well that night.

Finally, we found our way back to the lake where we started and I reflected on everything I accomplished throughout the trip. Our crew travelled over 75 miles by canoe, caught countless fish, and bonded well together in only 7 days. We woke up every one of those days and paddled, rain or shine, and really experienced what it’s like to be with nature. Not only that, I got to test my limits and see my potential. After this trip, I went home and knew how hard work and effort really do pay off.

Jordan Zapp
Process writing 2- Draft 1
September 29, 2014
Bl 6
Death by Pigeon
            “Can we have some breadsticks?” My little sister asks a man standing outside a restaurant.   He chuckles and nods.  Without hesitation, Anna bolts into the restaurant and then runs back out, her hand full of packaged breadsticks.  She runs toward the square like it’s Christmas. 
            “We have to go!  Hurry!” she yells back at us.  My brother takes off after her. My dad rolls his eyes.  My mom suppresses a laugh.  I just look up.  The buildings that line the narrow streets are brilliant, the bright colors practically shimmering in the July heat.  The black box windows contrasting every building make me wonder what may lie on the other side.  As we cross a small stone bridge, a long, black gondola passes beneath us, complete with a tall man in a red beret.  He sings a beautiful song in Italian and rows lazily down the canal.  Small artisan shops selling colorful glass pieces are stacked like blocks along the cobblestone street, their creations catching and scattering the light. Ah, Venice.
            We had been waiting all day to get to the square.  After touring a million museums and churches (which I enjoyed, while my siblings loudly complained) and stopping for gelato three times (which we all enjoyed), we could not hold in our excitement any longer.   We spilled onto the square and each took in a sharp breath of anticipation.  St. Mark’s Square, or Piazza San Marco, is the buzzing center of Venice, Italy.  Artisan shops, fancy restaurants, gelaterias, and a huge church surround the square.   Vendors set up shop anywhere they please, and yell out to tourists, boasting the best prices.  That is all well and good, but my siblings and I have our eye on one attraction in particular: pigeons. 
            Hundreds of these flying fiends flock the center of the square.    These pigeons are unlike the ordinary birds you might find in New York City.  Around us, other tourists have the right idea.  They hold breadcrumbs in their palms, arms out, and if luck is with them, a few pigeons may land on their arms and feast on the bread.   It is an honor to have a St. Mark’s pigeon land on your arms, or at least it makes for a good story.  Anyway, my siblings and I get right to it, crushing the breadsticks in our hands and holding them out for the pigeons to snack on.    Much to our delight, several birds land on our arms, their small talons digging into the sleeves of our shirts.  They peck away at our palms, snatching up breadcrumbs as fast as lightning. 
            At first, there were two pigeons on either of my arms, then came another, and another, and another, until birds were stacked up to my shoulders.  I laughed nervously, but hey, they were just pigeons, right?  Suddenly, I feel something land on my back, something sharp scratching my skin.  Something else lands squarely on my head, tangling itself in the only nest-like thing in all of Venice: my hair.  I am overcome with them.  I cannot see, and I am convinced they will lift me off the ground and fly away.  These somethings, of course, are pigeons, but that does not stop me.  They have crossed the line from adorable pigeons to evil, I am sure of it.    
            “AAAAAAAAAGH!” I let out a shriek and whip my arms around violently.  All I can see are gray and white wings, in the air, in my eyes and mouth.  In a flurry of feathers and obnoxious squawking, every vicious pigeon takes off, hovering in the air for only a moment, before swooping down onto some other innocent victim.  I take a deep breath, they are all gone, I think.  I am so wrong, so hopelessly and foolishly wrong. 
            I feel an aggressive tug on my scalp.  I yell some profanity and make another helicopter motion with my arms.  The bird will not let go.  It whips around, its left leg wrapped up in a sun-stained mane of brown hair that belongs to me.  Some part of me knows it is stuck, but I am in panic mode, seeing red, and hitting at the poor thing with everything I’ve got.  By now, people are staring, laughing, and taking pictures with their phones.  My life flashes before my eyes.  This is how it ends, I think to myself, death by pigeon. 
            Fortunately for me, that is not how it ends.  My mother contains her laughter long enough to step in and attempt to extricate this stupid pigeon from my hair.  When she is successful, the deadly winged creature flies away, all too eager to find a nice rooftop to sit on for a while. 
            Anna laughs and laughs, her rambunctious shrieking echoing through the square.  “Maybe,” she spits out between breaths, “you’ll learn to brush your hair someday.” I inhale deeply, trying to recover from the aerial attack.  I slowly open my eyes, and catch the glint of something white and glistening on top of her head.  Immediately, an evil grin spreads across my face like a disease.  I point to her hair, smooth, shiny and super straight. 

            “Better a nest than a landing strip for poop,” I smirk. 

A Day in the Dark

A Day in the Dark
 “I-is there any way to make you stay home longer?” Mustering those words out undoubtedly sipped a great amount of strength from me.  The emotions already began to deluge my entire body; the darkness surrounding me became somewhat bolder than before.  I started to tremble violently, relying on my sturdy cane for balance.  All the quivers slowly vanished when a soft hand grasped mine.  Though I never even got to see what it looked like, I already knew who this belonged to.
“I’m afraid not,” my older sister, Jennifer, replied, as she squeezed my free hand as a means of comfort.  “The university’s next break is next month, only three weeks from now.  Then I’ll come home…but you’ll survive, won’t you, T-Rex?”  I nodded, but the tears only redoubled, sliding down my cheeks in a feverish haste.
“But Jenny, how am I going to deal with high school without you?  This college stuff is so unfair!”  I protested, my words shrinking to pianissimo as I stated my greatest fear.  “The students there are going to make fun of me.”
“Don’t think like that,” Jenny muttered, her hand sweeping in to wipe the tears from my face.  Releasing my hand, a blanket of heat wrapped around me.  Hugs were rarities in my life, and they only arrived at sentimental events just like this one.  “You’ll be alright,” She whispered, her voice faltering.  “Goodbye, T-Rex, don’t get into any trouble.”  The worst part about getting a hug was its time limit, and furthermore, the level of its dedication.  You didn’t know if it was long or short, meaningful or hollow.  But because of Jenny’s rush to move in, the warmth of the hug ripped off of me too soon, and the pounding of sneakers began to drift away from my reach. 
*Two Weeks Later*
How does it feel to be blind? In my opinion, it’s a real thrill, yet some people don’t fully understand the experience.  It’s not hard, really.  Go ahead; close your eyes for a moment.  Every inch of light and color rapidly dissolves from existence, before you can pause to cherish it one last time.  In its place is a dull, interminable black wall that soon becomes your only friend.  You begin familiarize yourself with this newfound void, but it’s not long until you crave vision again, and you open your eyes.  A few seconds pass until you forget the tiny centimeter of patience you donated to this cause, and you continue your day without another care.
Everyone takes eyesight for granted, but in my case, it’s a paradise I’ll never be able to visit.
“You ready for your first day, Rex?”  Mom sweetly asked.  It’s 7 AM, and we’re in the kitchen, a place I recognize by the elegant fragrance of Mom’s lavender air freshener.  Mimicking the noise of an airplane, she sang, “Open up!”
“No,” I admitted dreadfully.  Along with Jenny’s moving day, the first day of high school was not something to celebrate.  “Aah,” An ice-cold spoonful of Yummy-O’s was immediately scooped into my mouth, the metal sending a brief jolt upon my tongue.  This is so humiliating, the idea of being fed for the last fourteen years.
“As long as you have Caney, you’re good.”  By the mischief in her tone, I could sense a smile was plastered on Mom’s face the moment she mentioned the name of my childhood “friend”.  Normal kids like Jenny had imaginary friends, and I had my white cane, which I used to name “Caney”.  Though children would eventually abandon the figments of their imaginations, my cane would be loyally at my side for the rest of my life.
“Mom,” I whined, and we chuckle until she serves me another mouthful of cereal.  The milk and the wrinkly O’s synchronously washed out my taste buds with a final mark of satisfaction. 
Clang!  The empty bowl dropped in the sink, which would then be waiting for its next bath in the sink.  Zzzip!  My pack opens.  Muffled sounds lead me to guess that she’s stuffing all of today’s supplies inside.  It’s the same routine every year. 
“Remember to tell all your teachers about your situation,” Mom reminded me for the tenth time in a row.  “They’ll know about you, so they have a textbook completely in Braille for you.”
“Okay,” I replied, settling my cane on the frosty porcelain floor.  Scratchy backpack straps rested on my shoulders, and Mom grabbed my unoccupied hand.  Her hands are usually soggy from yesterday’s dishwashing, and the texture of it is disconcerting.  Creeeak. The door opens, outside air streaming through my stale lungs.  The bottom of my cane is lifted into the car, and I plunged into the cozy backseat.  A click, a grumble, and we’re gone.
The road beneath us had many obstacles.  Bump, bump, bump.  However, Mom’s favorite radio station, Classical Corner, drones down the background noise.  The graceful glissando of the harp binds me into a dream-like spell, and the lightweight taps of the piano never fails to give me a joyous feeling.  But it’s the bass that transfixes me the most, with steadied pizzicatos and a hypnotic rhythm that makes me want to sway from left to right.  The smooth, composed characteristics of the bass had always captured my attention.
A sudden lurch interrupted my thoughts when Mom parked the car.  Reminiscence of what today was supposed to be returned, and it made me feel sick.  Mom helped me out of the car, and my cane hoofed a seemingly bumpy surface.  Mom’s hand slid into mine, and she guides me in.  Our entrance is marked by the sharp smell of fresh paint, and my cane meets ceramic.  Click, clack, click, goes my cane down the hallway.  Shwoom.  A carpeted floor satisfies my sneakers and cane.  “Good morning,” A deep voice rumbled.  Before I knew it, I was dragged westward, where Mom instructs me to sit down.
“Good morning, Principal Anderson.  My name is Nancy Lawson, and I have a son named Rex with a current disability:  blindness.”  Mom’s voice said almost confidently.  It’s as if she doesn’t know I’m next to her. 
I’m sensitive to the word “disability”, especially if it’s used towards me.  Although it’s true, the term cripples me; its negative connotation makes me feel like I don’t belong in any acceptable category.  I was born without any idea of what the world looked like; I had no template.  But other than that, it didn’t mean that I should be treated any differently.  I keep my thoughts to myself and let Principal Anderson continue.
“Oh yes, Rex Lawson,” Principal Anderson noted, his voice directing towards me.  “Pleasure to meet you, Rex,” I nodded, wishing that I wasn’t here.  Suddenly, the jazzy snap of “high heels”, according to Mom’s Braille shoe dictionary, took authority of our conversation, heading towards us from the right.
“Rex, this is Miss Tiffany George.” Principal Anderson introduced.  “She will lead you to all of your classes this year.”
“Morning, Rex,” Tiffany huffed a sigh, and I didn’t even need vision to tell that she was very unenthusiastic.  “How are you,” Tiffany sounded like she’s reading directly from a script, without any effort whatsoever. 
“Fine,” I puffed back with nearly the same lazy tone as Tiffany’s.
“Well, Tiffany,” Mom chirped, failing to notice the lack of excitement.  “Here’s Rex’s schedule!”  The whiz of paper made its way towards Tiffany.  “Principal Anderson, it was nice meeting you, but I need to be on my way.  If there are any problems with Rex, contact me on my cell.”  Shwoom.    
“Ten minutes left until the students arrive.”  Principal Anderson stated.  “Tiffany, you can take Rex to his locker to drop off that heavy backpack of his.”
“’Kay,” Her bored voice already began to annoy me.  I’m not as weary as she is, just anxious.  “Get up,” Tiffany barked, and the command made me stab my cane into the ground.    
“Have a great day!”  Principal Anderson blissfully called as I struggle to follow Tiffany.  He and Mom must be blinder than me not to discern Tiffany’s moody behavior.
I gradually formed a strong distaste for Tiffany, especially when she carelessly left me confused with the staircase.  “It’s a staircase, go up it.”  Tiffany’s know-it-all side was frustrating as I experiment the floor’s elevated level.  Gosh, what’s up with her?  I tentatively ascended, making every step with caution.  I haven’t been up the stairs without any assistance before.  My middle-school guide, Daphne, would link her arm with mine, singing the word “Up” constantly with an unrealistically cheerful tone.  Although it was embarrassing to ring arms with Daphne during school, I now preferred it over this.
As we trailed across another unfamiliar area in the school, I get exhausted of being so puzzled, and luckily, a plan struck me.  “Miss Tiffany?”  I spoke up.  The bossy ticking of her heels pauses, shrieking as they pivot towards me.  Under the newly-found spotlight, I inaudibly gulp before giving a half-hearted request.
“I’ve never said this to my mom, but I want to get an idea of what the school is like so I can navigate on my own.  What if you took me to a central spot in the school, and I tried to memorize the routes of each of my classes from there?  All I have to know is whether to go up, down, right, or left.  I’ve been doing this since we’ve left the office, but your pace is a little too fast.  I have good memory, though, so I was thinking you can remind me of my paths well enough for me to memorize it for the rest of the school year.”
Nothing comes from Tiffany’s mouth for a while, and I began to wonder if my unrevised scheme was being processed through, or on the verge of being completely scrapped.  “No, do as you’re told,” Tiffany decided.  An unpleasant screech broke my eardrums, followed by a steady clacking ahead.  My cane talked to the beat of the shoes until after a short moment, Tiffany halted.  The swivel of a school lock healed my ears. 
Jenny showed me her school lock before.  The process of opening it was one of my favorite sounds.  Swivel, pause, swivel, pause, swivel, click!  Naturally, I wouldn’t be able to open the lock, but Jenny gave me an outlook of her experience by letting me feel it.  Rugged edges covered the shape where you place your fingers, and I enjoyed playing with the jagged lines.  They reminded me of Mom’s bumpy car trips, except they possessed a quality that comforted your fingers, definitely not for feet and a cane.
A gust of air slapped my face, and a light drumming of something like Tiffany’s high heels was on my left, where the lockers were.  “Your locker is 5481.”  Tiffany indicated.  “So, um…yeah,” An unnecessarily loud SLAM echoed in the hallway before I could even reach out to touch it, then Tiffany clopped away. 
“I’m going to the restroom,” She told me, unexpectedly grabbing my wrist.  Sharp daggers punctured my skin, and my hand forcibly slapped a solid box at room-temperature.  “Keep your hand on the water fountain until I say so.”  Creak, shwoom.  She reminds me of one of Jenny’s old friends that Jenny used to complain about: someone who would socialize with her friends rather than taking full responsibility of priorities ahead.  I tried my best to understand Jenny’s stress at the time, but it never came to my complete understanding until now.
It wasn’t very long after Tiffany’s leave when the commotion thundered from an immeasurable distance.  With each passing second, the chaos crept closer, elevating with a blend of pain and anxiety.  They’re coming, and I’m invisibly chained to a water fountain.
Second grade was the horrifying year that provoked my long-lasting fear.  At the time, we’re all seven to eight years old, the age that initiates thoughts and opinions of its own.  Many kids were bold to state theirs directly into my face, and if not, somewhere close by.  First came the typical questions, which I had gotten accustomed to now:
“Why does he have a cane?” 
“How old does he think he is?”
 “Miss Simpson, why does he have sunglasses when we’re inside?”
            Others’ reactions to my blindness were more harsh than curious, especially if they knew about my blindness already.
“How is he going to be in the spring musical looking like that?”  “Exactly, he won’t fit in with any of the parts.”
“Want to see what’s on the lunch menu today?  Oops!  I said the word ‘see’!  MY BAD!”
 “Hey, Rex!  How many fingers am I holding up, huh?  Oh, that’s right, you can’t see.
By the end of elementary school, the entire class was used to having a blind person, making third grade, fourth grade, and fifth grade a breeze.  The petty insults slowed down, and I was starting to feel accepted, wishing I had some kind of visual to openly express my happiness.  When I told Jenny about it, she told me about the gift of smiling.  I’ve been unknowingly using it for a while, it seems, and now that I knew its true meaning, I began smiling to others as a means of pure gratitude.  Everything was at peace for now. 
Dad’s career transferred to a different state the day after fifth grade ended.  Jenny and I were placed in a middle school that served grades 6-9, but because students had more independence here, their harmful actions were often aimed towards me.  Peers would lay their items on the floor, deliberately becoming angry with me whenever I tripped over them.  “You just crushed my brand-new smartphone…can’t you watch where you’re going?”  Besides the classic prank, the taunts prepared were more treacherous. 
“Rex Lawson, can you hear me?  It’s your principal speaking, and I want you in my office right now…if you can find it.” A pre-mature voice mocked, followed by high-pitched snickers.      
“Oh, look, it’s Grandpa Rex strolling down the hallways.  Dude, let’s say hi to him and see if he can hear us,” joked the guys with gravelly throats.
Jenny eventually discovered the bullies from the supposed bruises on my legs.  Ever since the incident, she’s fought them off.
All these years, she’s defended me from the cruelties of this world, but even under her brave exterior, she knew how frustrating it was to endure something as bad as this.  “It’s tough to be living your life, but you’re a strong T-Rex for not breaking after all this time.”  Jenny admitted one day after school.  “If I had to be in someone else’s shoes, it would be yours… only if it would mean that you had a chance to live an abuse-free life for at least 24 hours.”
After my graduation from middle school, our family moved again to be closer to Jenny’s university.  Though I was happy to be near Jenny while she’s gone, I was going to be in yet another unfamiliar school.  I was vulnerable to everyone and everything, and there was no way to avoid it.  And now that this new collection of students was beginning to stampede towards my direction, I wanted to hide.
For the first few moments of the parade, I was undetected.  Nevertheless, I grasped tighter onto the box, waiting for the attention to latch onto my skin. In my chest, tension inflated like a balloon until it finally popped, leaving behind its empty, broken pieces behind.  It crippled me in the end, unable to battle the apprehension any longer. 
“Hey, Monica,” A girl’s airy voice squeaked.  “Did you ever notice that there’s a guy with a cane over there?  Is he staring at us through those sunglasses?”
“I don’t think so.”  Monica replied slowly, a more mature tone wrapping around her words.  “I think he’s blind, like my cousin.  Thomas has always told me that_”
“Monica!  Why are you looking at that guy like that?  I’m going to tell Wilbur!”
“What the heck, Ryan?  I don’t even know him.”
“Yeah, right.” Four booms headed towards me, the noise growing with each step.  Ryan’s voice, lowered to a firm whisper, was uncomfortably near my face, my cheek absorbing the heat of the moment.  He growled, “New kid, you better leave Monica alone.  Don’t think that you can just come in here and try to get her with those sunglasses.  Take them off!”  Boldly demanding those last words, fat and grubby fingers gripped the stiff poles above my ears.
“No!  Ryan!” Monica yelled, and a loud clatter interrupted her ongoing protests.  A deafeningly long silence followed the reckless action.  Oddly enough, my eyes suddenly felt this burning sensation, and the pain was unbearable.   Shwoom.
“What in the world is going on here?”  Tiffany broke the eerie stillness.  Unlike her behavior from before, her strong, soldier-like pitch startled me.  Taking time to analyze the situation, Tiffany’s high heels took the floor before she came to a halt. “Ryan Schmidt,” She concluded.  “Anderson’s told me about your criminal record.  Did you know that this boy is blind?”  The sharp daggers returned, except that I’m grateful.  The temples of my sunglasses were placed back on my ears, calming the irritation.
“N-no, ma’m.”  Ryan stuttered.
“Really?  You didn’t see the cane?”  Tiffany scoffed, which was a faint reminder of her stuffy self.  “The sunglasses that you just threw protect his fragile eyes, and his eyes could have been easily damaged.  You really need to learn some manners.” High heels wailing, Tiffany must have steered a different direction. “You look responsible.  Lead him to the principal’s office.”
“Where is that?”  Monica asked. 
“Here’s a map,” The sound of crinkled paper tickles my eardrums.
“Thank you.  Come on, Ryan.”  Monica called.  Ryan’s frustration was expressed thoroughly through his departure, a dragged, saggy walk.  Shweep, shweep, shweep.  Once the dull sound died down, applause detonated from the crowd. 
“Yeah, don’t mention it.” Waving away her newfound recognition, Tiffany’s attention turned to me.  “Look, I’m sorry for giving you such a bad attitude.  The last few weeks were pretty rough for me, and just like you, I’m trying to get used to the changes that are attacking me at this moment.  You’re a good kid; you didn’t deserve the harsher side of me.  But Ryan definitely needs some form of discipline, heh.”  Surprisingly enough, the knives didn’t hurt when her hand overlapped mine.  “Can we start over?”
“Sure,” I said, shrugging.  Then the bell, which was an elevator’s chime, rang.
“Oh!  Let’s get going.  First stop:  History.”  Tiffany announced, tugging my arm lightly before we glided to class.
*3 Weeks Later*
Ring!  Ring!  “I’ll get it,” Dad announced, the whish of the telephone lifting into the air.  “It’s Jenny!”  He spoke excitedly.  “Rex, come talk to her!”
“Okay, okay,” I find my way into the living room, which is dusted with the scent of cinnamon.  Dad helps me onto a velvet couch and allows me a break from my cane.  “Hello?”
“Hey, T-Rex!  Guess what, I’m coming home tomorrow!  Can’t wait to see you again…how’s high school so far?”
“Fantastic.”
“Whoa, seriously?  Where’s the sarcasm?”
I laugh.  “It really is great; the kids, the classes, the school, they’re all amazing.”
“What happened?”  Jenny asked, naturally curious.
“I have this guide named Tiffany, who used to be rough on me until a bully came,”  I began.  “Then she started defending me, and sent the troublemaker to the principal’s office.  Now she entertains me during lunch about her rebellious childhood, and helps me out on topics I’m struggling on.”
“That’s nice to hear.”  Jenny said.  “About the other students?”
Well, all the bullies are gone!  I thought it was neat to hear that in one week, the bully’s story had circulated around the entire school.  It was like all of my elementary school years combined, all that convincing to get others used to me, had squeezed into the first two weeks of school.  Isn’t that great?”
“Wow, it is!” Jenny’s clapping could be heard through the speakerphone.  “I want to meet this Tiffany someday and thank her for her efforts.  She seems amazing.”
“She is.  I’ll tell you more tomorrow.”
“Sounds like a plan!  Say, do you know where Mom is?  I want to talk to her.”  Jenny asked.  Sweep.  The heat radiating off the phone disintegrates, and Dad’s boots sigh their way to the kitchen.
Telling Jenny about my progress so far released the last of the weights off my shoulders.  Everything had settled down, and for the first time, life without vision was truly perfect.               

Madman, Architect, Carpenter, Judge: Roles and the Writing Process by Betty Sue Flowers

Madman, Architect, Carpenter, Judge: Roles and the Writing Process:

“What’s the hardest part of writing?” I ask on the first day of class.

“Getting started,” someone offers, groaning.

“No, it’s not getting started,” a voice in the back of the room corrects. “It’s keeping on once you do get started. I can always write a sentence or two-but then I get stuck.”

“Why?” I ask.

“I don’t know. I am writing along, and all of a sudden I realize how awful it is, and I tear it up. Then I start over again, and after two sentences, the same thing happens.”

 Madman, Architect, Carpenter, Judge: Roles and the Writing Process

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