100 Word Challenge 2/12

Look, I just had to stop at the 7/11. But the bike rack was full, and I didn’t want to leave it out on the street… so I used a spare ziptie to attach it to a tree. And it would only work if the bike was standing straight up. After five or ten minutes of struggling, I finally managed to get it in place. Giving a satisfied smile and feeling very proud of myself, I turned around and started for the gas station.

 

This was my post for the 100WC. Thanks for reading, and feel free to leave your URL in the comments!
Grace
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One Response

  1. Ross Mannell (Team 100WC) says:

    Hello Grace,

    Yours is the first story I’ve read where the writer claims to have put the bike in place for a good reason. Most have written of discovering the bike in place and wondering how it happened. Well done!

    My only suggestion would be not to start a sentence with ‘and’ or ‘but’ because these usually join sentences.

    Keep writing and sharing. I like your creative ideas.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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