Hello, I hope you have had a great day! Today for my 100wc this is what I wrote. It was a challenge to try to get all these random words to work together but it ended up doing well. So I hope you enjoy!
As she played her violin I stared her down with jealousy. She had the perfect smile, perfectly
painted nails, and her hair was dirty blonde with a purple tint. I couldn’t express how much I wished I looked like her! If I had one of her amazing traits I would be so happy. Meanwhile, instead I look like an ELEPHANT! As I stared her down, I noticed she started to walk towards me. She probably noticed my stalking behavior. She walks right in front of me and points to my feet and says, ¨I wish I had those shoes!¨
That´s it! I hope you enjoyed my 100wc this week. Have you ever been in a situation like this? Tell me in the comments! Im Naomi the ferret lover and I hope you have a great rest of your day!
Many thanks for sharing. Lovely use of repetition and a lovely twist. Well done.
Hello! I love how your story has a message. It was really good how you created the envy in the story and then showed how we can be so wrong about the perceptions other people have of us. I liked how the narrator of your story shared her thoughts with the reader. Well done.
An interesting story with an important lesson, Naomi! I liked your opening line a lot, because it sets the scene and tells us what is happening in a concise way. The way you described the narrator’s thoughts on the violin player also conveys their jealousy in a vivid way. Keep writing!