Morning dreams:
It was scary in the deep dark woods. My hands shook as I drifted closer to a lumpy, human-shaped tree sitting in the middle of the woods. Something in my mind told me to turn back, but my heart told me to keep going. Tiny little stones POUNCED into my feet. I felt the strong winds get stronger. I started to drift towards the tree as my head started spinning uncontrollably. “GETT UPP!!” said a strong voice next to me. “TIME FOR SCHOOL!” That voice had been my sister’s, and just like that I was in another world again.
Thanks for reading my 100WC!
Naomi
Hi Naomi-
I am impressed by your 100WC post this week; it’s full of descriptive details and sets a mysterious tone from the outset. I’m glad to see that you included categories, too. You’ll see I added two more categories that you can use in the future – 100 Word Challenge and Creative Writing. 🙂 Thanks for writing and posting on Friday! Because you made the deadline, your post is now being shared with other student bloggers around the globe! See you next class-
Mrs. Rombach
Hi Naomi,
This was an excellent 100WC entry, great job! Your use of description was brilliant and really helped set the scene for the reader. You managed to create a great mysterious atmosphere, so keep this up because it makes the reader interested in reading more.
Next time I would like you to use even more descriptive detail if you can, because this was a real strength for you here. Keep up the good work!
Ok, thanks so much for the tips. I will for sure try to add more detail, but i’m so glad you enjoyed it!