A380

by Armando Retana – Ehring 4

 

 

Majestic you are

 

With your immense wings

 

Big like the ocean

 

Your engines roaring

 

Like a lion claiming

 

It’s throne

 

Ruling over the skies

 

The biggest of them all

 

With you luxurious cabin

 

Like a mansion in the air

 

Making everyone change

 

To be good enough for you

 

Topping your enemies

 

With an easy flick of a switch

 

All the others

 

Wishing to be you

 

But none come close

 

You are truly

 

Ruler of all

 

The skies

One thought on “A380

  1. Majestic you are

    With your immense wings

    Big like the ocean

    Your engines roaring

    Like a lion claiming

    It’s throne

    Ruling over the skies

    The biggest of them all

    With you luxurious cabin

    Like a mansion in the air

    Making everyone change

    To be good enough for you

    Topping your enemies

    With an easy flick of a switch

    All the others

    Wishing to be you

    But none come close

    You are truly

    Ruler of all

    The skies

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    The type of poem i wrote is ode.
    I chose an Airbus A380 because i love airplanes and the a380 is my favorite.
    The tone of my poem is glorious.
    .
    “With your wings big like the ocean” “your engines roaring like a lion claiming it’s throne”.
    1 specific way i edited my poem is i changed “with an easy” to “with an easy flick of a switch”. Also i changed ‘all others wishing to be you” to “all others wishing to be you but none come close”.
    This poem was very easy for me to write because i love airplanes.
    I feel fairly confident with my final draft because i tried to add as much figurative language as i could

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